Wednesday, 23 April 2014

Dungeon Crawl: The Gingerbread House



Hi and welcome to this week's Dungeon Crawl, brought to you by Romancing the Kink.

The Gingerbread House is the second story in my little collection, Miranda’sTempest. As you might guess, it's a retelling of the Hansel and Gretel fairytale, although in my version they are not siblings but young lovers who meet in the forest. It's the least subtle tale in the book, full of kinky accoutrements from start to finish! Oh, and it's unambiguously femdom too. Here's a snippet (and don't worry; it all works out just fine in the end...):

Hansel shifts his wrists to ease the pressure of the shackles. The iron digs into his flesh and already the skin is reddening. His legs are cramped and he longs to stretch them out straight. But his cage is no more than three feet long and he can barely move. His hands hang beside his head, the cuffs chained to bars above him. His helplessness amplifies every twinge in his joints into a thousand tiny points of discomfort. He shifts his weight as far as the metal around him will allow.
‘Be still,’ the witch says.
Hansel’s body freezes. Her voice holds an absolute power over him. The only movement he can manage now is the rising of his chest as his breath deepens in fear. He gazes up at the creature. And at his darling Gretel, standing meekly behind her, caught in the same enchantment.
‘Don’t pretend you’re hating this,’ the witch says in a deep, alluring tone. ‘My spell works only on the naturally submissive. It has always been your deepest desire to be controlled and dominated by a strong, beautiful woman.’
Hansel’s cheeks flush. He is deeply afraid of what this woman could do to him. She is no hag, but her beauty is dark and menacing. A shiver of arousal rushes through his pelvis as she speaks, and his cock twitches.
‘Let Gretel go,’ he whispers. ‘Do what you want with me, but let her go.’ It is a struggle even to get these few words out without being commanded to speak. But he has to try to help his beautiful Gretel to escape.
‘You are in no position to make a bargain,’ says the witch. ‘And don’t speak again unless I expressly tell you to.’
Hansel’s jaw clamps shut. Her power is terrifying. A bead of cool sweat runs down his temple.


5 comments:

  1. Such a lovely concept... love Hansel's line... She is no hag, but her beauty is dark and menacing.

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  2. Ooo! How very interesting. I don't normally go for F/m, but I would dearly like to read the rest of this. Lovely snippet, Tilly!

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  3. OK, wow, totally totally different take on this! Very very cool and totally hot!

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  4. Very different to the story I read to my kids:-) it does lend itself to a kinky retelling.

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  5. You have a very vivid imagination. The old fairy tales are fun to read when they're twisted. Well done.

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